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End Result/Image I used for writing this: fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201…

Here it is, my first TG (TF as well, which I count as the same) writing, both on DeviantArt and overall. To be fair, I don't love this one. It set the stage for the future of my writings, to be sure, but it's kinda short for my tastes and has no real soul. But, because why not, I'm putting it out there with only a few minor changes , as well as the mind change along with it (which was written much later, which is why it is longer then the actual TG). Enjoy!!!

...Also, if you could tell me how to put an image into the writing space, that would be wonderful (Don't worry, got that fixed). Constructive criticism is also welcome, but this is probably isn't the best representation of my writings now.  
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It's a little fast paced, but i like it.