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Source: POKEMON MAY

Holy shit. Here it is, Klonoahedgehog, your delayed request for a TG to May, with a touch of stupidity. So yeah, I started work on this TG on Saturday, if my memory is correct, and was hoping to get it done the same day. However, I was doing too much with it. I was trying to make something a little too artsy, and a lot ambitious. And I hated it. After a while, I really started to resent what I did, and thought that it was awful. However, I soon got into the swing of writing, and kept up with the same style, up until about half way, probably more like 2/3, of the way done, and I was writing the shirt. However, I was stuck, and all of that frustration just boiled over at that moment. And, it was then and there that I discarded everything I'd written up to that point, with the exception of the first few lines, and started writing it normally. All of this took me into Monday, where I reached the Mind Change, where I become dumber. However, I once again hit a snag (which, come to think of it, is ironic), and my new set time for sleep made me hold off for another day. But I'm back, and this time finished it up with nothing else to add. This is easily the longest time I've spend writing a TG, and possibly the most frustrating. However, while I'm not the fondness of my work, I do think that I did a pretty fantastic job, and I hope the requester finds it worth the wait. Hope you enjoy. 

P.S. For a responce to Klonoahedgehog's comment on Update 6, I'll be glad to hear your mysterious request you mentioned previously. However, if things keep going like this, which I hope to God, Allah, and every other deity that it doesn't, it will just take a while. Also, the requests aren't the issue. I love taking requests. It's just that I have my own ideas that I also want to pursue. That said, I'd still love to hear what you had in mind. Constructive Criticism and Requests are welcome. 

P.S.S. Any spelling mistake here WAS INTENTIONAL (for the most part). It was an idea that carried over from the first draft, where I became a little dumber with each passing line. However, I ended up scratching the whole thing, but I'm too lazy and pressed for time to really change anything. Also, I forgot to mention that I'm not so confident on how well I did for the growing dumbness. I haven't really tried anything like this before, so I hope I didn't fuck it up too badly. 

P.S.S.S. I already said this once in an update to my Update, but it bears repeating. R.I.P Robin Williams, everyone will remember you dearly for years and generations to come. 
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Please do at tg to Serena. I love how detailed and mature your stories are and I think you could do great with Serena. Some requests I have is that they become the XYZ version of Serena but more mature and really wants to rich Ash. But not dumb. Personally, the dumb part is a bit annoying. But, I’m not really against it, so whatever. So, yeah. Please do one for Serena!!!